L.I- To describe your own secret garden.
An ancient door that
turned my world upside down. I could have never prepared myself for what I saw
in the secret garden. The greenest grass I had ever seen, millions of flowers
of all shapes, sizes and smells surrounded me and made me one with nature. I
was frightened but could not help but feel peaceful in this place. Birds
chirped happily around me filling my soul with their joyful tones.
As I continued my
journey the wind whisked my hair, an eerie but enjoyable feeling. The sun in
the sky was forcefully fighting the trees to penetrate the ground below. Overhanging branches protected the grass and
me from the harsh sun above like bodyguards. The beautiful smell of the flowers
whisked up my nostrils making me smile. This was the most amazing place I had
ever been. This was paradise!
Ahead of me were
steep steps covered in mountains of mouldy moss and beside it water oozed
perfectly out of a glistening waterfall like lemonade being poured from a
glass. I was in heaven. I dipped my toes into the glistening water and looked
around. All of a sudden reality hit me. How did I get here? And how will I get
myself out?
Your task today is to write about your own secret garden that you stumble across. You must tell us what you can see, hear, feel and what you are thinking. Give as much description as possible so you can keep the reader interested.
You can 'BORROW' ideas, words, phrases from Mr Clark's writing but try and include as much of your own ideas and descriptions as possible.
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