Thursday, October 29, 2015

Room 11 Writing Using Language Features

This week we have been practicing using similes, alliteration, powerful verbs and interesting adjectives in our writing. 

This is our writing about the wind.

The wind is freezing like ice and is rushing and blowing.
Abigail


Oh wind, oh wind, blowing against me!
The wind is like a soft pillow.
Analise


The wind is like a wild tornado.
The wind is battling with the trees.
Nathan

The wind looks like hands doing a hula dance.
The wind whoops, whips and whacks the door.
The wind whoops like galloping horses.
Maryam

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